Harry Potter Fans: Answer Please?

I definitely want to read more of it. You are a good writer, I can tell. Far better than me. I'm trying to write a fanfic myself but it's nothing compared to your. I do have a suggestion. You might want to talk less about hair...it sounded good at first when you said, "Closing the door behind her, her long black hair rippling behind her" but then u started naming off all their hair colors and it just got a bit distracting imo. I loved it though!